This was great and wonderfully written, (as always)! ♥ I'm so glad you ended up filling that prompt! :)
I think the only thing wrong that I noticed was there were some spelling/grammar errors here and there, but otherwise it was very well written imo?
are you going to put this one on FFN? I would really love to add it to the Japan C2 (http://www.fanfiction.net/community/Land_Of_The_Rising_Sun/84106/) that I made.
I would quote my favorite parts too haha, but if I did that we'd be here all day (as with most of your writing!) ♥ imo anyway all of your latest Giripan fics have been fabulous, (including many of your other latest Hetalia fics, not just the Giripan fics, too~) and I can't wait to read what other Hetalia fic you have in store! :)
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Date: 2010-08-14 02:58 am (UTC)I'm so glad you ended up filling that prompt! :)
I think the only thing wrong that I noticed was there were some spelling/grammar errors here and there, but otherwise it was very well written imo?
are you going to put this one on FFN? I would really love to add it to the Japan C2 (http://www.fanfiction.net/community/Land_Of_The_Rising_Sun/84106/) that I made.
I would quote my favorite parts too haha, but if I did that we'd be here all day (as with most of your writing!) ♥ imo anyway all of your latest Giripan fics have been fabulous, (including many of your other latest Hetalia fics, not just the Giripan fics, too~) and I can't wait to read what other Hetalia fic you have in store! :)