Wow. This...this...this was lovely. It was extraordiniarilty well-written. Descriptions were beautiful, dialogue and interaction were perfect and the lightness and darkness and undertones of angst and the love.... Oh YES.

-Even if I drown

Everytime this line appeared, I got heart palpitations. It's just so symbolic, and brought to mind so images images.

I cannot stop stressing what an awesome piece of work this is. This is truly well done. An exceptional KuroFai. Keep it up! :-)

~Saha