ext_55441 ([identity profile] ego-chan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bonnefois 2005-08-29 10:50 am (UTC)

Syaoran offers help them fight with weapons of wood, stone and his unyielding honor. Kurogane offers for the taste of blood and sweat is too faint in his memory.

Fai offers to go along for he has nothing else to do.


That is so Fai right there. I was just in awe of it. I mean, so Fai, you know? People never seem to have him right for long. He tends to fall apart near the end of a fic.
He didn't do so badly this time though, but it seems to be very hard to be conclusive with Fai in a fic. *has been reading too much TRC fanfiction recently*

Oh, and I must tell you now that I have read your other TRC fics and I adore them. I keep forgetting to mention that, sorry. ^^;; I want to get into PoT so that I can read those fics, too, but I know nothing of PoT, so I do not understand them completely. ^^''

But, good job! This fic is great. I love the description of the people and the world. Very nice, though I feel ill-ish at the idea of sex on bloody shores (I am so weak stomach, you see...it is a great effect, though, for people who aren't squimish as me--and I freak out when I read manga with too much blood, lol *ish sad*).

You must write more and more and more KuroFai so that my lame-ass KuroFai fic never gets out. ^^''

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