http://radish-lily.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] radish-lily.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bonnefois 2009-11-30 04:45 am (UTC)

Oh L'Arachel. You are such a character.

Two quick nitpicky bits--
L’Arachel a single crystalline tear.
I think you dropped a verb. Happens to me all the time. Also, at Erika is yet more in dangerous you meant danger right?

I also feel the need to inform you that you win at life for just... writing L'Arachel. Writing her well, at that. (Did I mention I'm rather fond of this pairing too? :D) If you had too much fun writing her, well... there's nothing wrong with that. :D

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