I was trying to comment and stuff but then my computer crashed. So here I am to finish reading and commenting!

Hot spicy meat: It seems less intuitive for Soren to get that after Ike ordered a huge spicy monstrosity....

An orange glow clung to the night sky, lightening the darkness of the oncoming night. He’d once had an annoying classmate who found such colors entirely ‘romantic’. He knew it by name, as it was the decidedly unromantic phenomenon of light pollution. Air pollution?

Anyway.

This is so cute. Is this why you don't want me to touch it? >.>