ext_52003 ([identity profile] doumeki.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bonnefois 2008-12-25 06:29 pm (UTC)

OMG ILU. *_* HOW AWESOME ARE THESE?

You like to torment poor 'Soka-chan, though, which is kind of just awesome.

Absolutely hilarious.

Also? A few errors, darlin'.

His white

The rest of the sentence was truncated.

Tsuzki calls Their new

It should be Tsuzuki, and there should be a period between 'calls' and 'Their'.


Kwanza from to Solstice

Probably, you mean 'From Kwanza to Solstice' or some variation thereof. Also, there should be another 'a' at the end of Kwanzaa.


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