I love it. I agree with myaru about how you show Micaiah's abilities. Aw Pelleas. Don't let that nobody court look down on you, you're worth twelve of them! They weren't the ones fighting against the Begnion army, yanno. It's sort of heartbreaking that the one thing where Micaiah can't fight for him is the place where he shouldn't need to fight at all.
As usual, I love your imagery. The tidbits of description are so evocative. His thoughts are the rain against her windows. -> guh.
The last sentences make me so happy. I want to quote them all back at you, I love them. Daein and Pelleas and Micaiah and how much they love this country.
And she loves every harsh point of this land.
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Deep inside there is a gentleness, a still and a hope and because of that she believes in her king, right or wrong.
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I love it. I agree with
As usual, I love your imagery. The tidbits of description are so evocative. His thoughts are the rain against her windows. -> guh.
The last sentences make me so happy. I want to quote them all back at you, I love them. Daein and Pelleas and Micaiah and how much they love this country.
And she loves every harsh point of this land.
...
Deep inside there is a gentleness, a still and a hope and because of that she believes in her king, right or wrong.
YES.