I read them both, and loved them, so much. ^_^ The last line of Fairytale just left me breathless. I can't understand, how you manage to create that atmosphere, but it just seems so right for them. <3<3<3
Perhaps I shouldn't say this (because otherwise everything was perfect), but it was just a bit too disturbing to pass: probabilities sum to 1, ie. if you express them in percentages, they sum to 100. Hence the probability of Tezuka becoming fukubuchou 79% can't hold at the same time with probability of Oishi becoming fukubuchou 65%. I'm sorry, probably this sounds petty and obnoxious.
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Perhaps I shouldn't say this (because otherwise everything was perfect), but it was just a bit too disturbing to pass: probabilities sum to 1, ie. if you express them in percentages, they sum to 100. Hence the probability of Tezuka becoming fukubuchou 79% can't hold at the same time with probability of Oishi becoming fukubuchou 65%. I'm sorry, probably this sounds petty and obnoxious.
Hopefully your head is okay.